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Friday, June 19, 2020

Maize

                                           

One day me and my friend Kirra went in to a Maize. But we got lost. Kirra I said what do we do. I don't know how we get out, maybe we can make a cut through. The buses no because     Cut ourselves then what will we do. Maybe we can climb over the fence. ok but be careful I will. Am out ok now help me out ok ok I will  You are going to get cut What. THE END        

                 


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  1. TaleiJune 21, 2020 at 7:12 PM

    Hi Emma, I hope Kirra got out of the maze ok! Have you ever been in a maze yourself? Next time make sure you read your story out loud and correct any mistakes.

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