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Thursday, September 10, 2020

The Pool


            The Pool was usual enough; it had water a slide,a                       waterfall, a diving board and steps into
Into It. Me and my Mum did what families do we cannon Balled into the pool. Leapt into the tube slide.
Got  blown by the wind. Screamed at an ant belly flopped 
And splashed. Screamed at my dad for doing
A bally flop.
Doing nothing important. 
            
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousOctober 14, 2020 at 2:54 PM

    Hi Emma I like the way you explain how the pool was when you went with your mum.But maybe you can add some more details of what you did or how you felt when you went.But apart from that amazing work.

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